Level of visitors to Western Europe
According to chart, level of travelers aboard occurs increase There is several reasons why they are doing traveler activities. Most of the people decide UK as place with great destinations for holiday, business, visit friends and relatives or other reasons. Several reasons that mentioned are as result why visitors come to UK. In this essay I will explain number of visitors to UK appropriate with chart.
In 1994 to 1995 level of visitors to holiday was decrease moreover was began rose steadily 1996 onwards. Similarly, sector business levels of visitors rose steadily from 1994 onwards. Destination for visit friends and relatives decline from 1994 to 1996 however, number of visit began rose steadily from 1996 onwards. Afterwards, in other reasons chart showed number of visitor from 1994 until 1995 reasonable decrease although, slightly increase 1996 onwards.
In conclusion, majority visitors decided to visit destination place because various reasons. Western Europe become one of option destination visiting place. Visitors dominate visit to Europe for essential holiday and rest only usual visit such as business, visit friends and relatives or other reasons.
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Sentence: In this essay I will explain number of visitors to UK appropriate with chart.
Description: A noun, singular, common is not usually followed by an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to UK and appropriate
Sentence: In 1994 to 1995 level of visitors to holiday was decrease moreover was began rose steadily 1996 onwards.
Description: The token was is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to was and decrease
Description: The token was is not usually followed by a verb, past tense
Suggestion: Refer to was and began
Sentence: Destination for visit friends and relatives decline from 1994 to 1996 however, number of visit began rose steadily from 1996 onwards.
Description: A verb, past tense is not usually followed by a verb, past tense
Suggestion: Refer to began and rose
Sentence: Western Europe become one of option destination visiting place.
Description: The fragment Europe become one is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace become with verb, past tense
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No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.364 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.637 7.5
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Score: 5.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
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No. of Words: 180 200
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No. of Different Words: 96 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.663 4.0
Average Word Length: 5.389 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.455 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 81 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 66 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 40 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 17 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
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Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.174 0.07
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