The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s. Summarize the in formation by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart shows four main causes of land degradation all around the world,whereas the table lists all the causes of land degradation by three regions: North America, Europe and Oceania during the 1990s.
It can be clearly seen that over-grazing was the main occasion of worldwide degredation reaching 35%. Deforestation owns 30%, while over-cultivation takes 28% of the chart, leaving 7% for other reasons.
According to the table, most of Europe's land was degraded due to deforestation(9,8%) and cultivation (7,7%). In contrast, Oceania had 13% land degraded and it was mainly due to over-grazing(11,3%). North America had a lower proportion of land degraded (5%) and the reason was over-cultivation (3,3%).
Overall, it is obvious that Europe faced serious problems in terms of land degradation and the main causes were deforestation and over-cutivation.
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Sentence: It can be clearly seen that over-grazing was the main occasion of worldwide degredation reaching 35.
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