suramadu bridge
All countries have their unique own icon. It just for symblozing about the wealthy of country. For example, Kuala Lumpur has a PETRONAS Tower, Jakarta has Monas, and Paris has a Eiffel tower. Not only country that has an unique icon but also cities such as Surabaya and Madura whose a Suramadu Bridge. This bridge is relaying the way between Surabaya and Madura which are separated by beach. Then, it will be awarded as a longest bridge in Indonesia. Therefore, to build a bridge which meet a sea lively will take a high risk from the company that provides the materials and from funding also.
Since a national consortium happened, the company that will take a responsibility to build it was a construction company from China. That a national consortium happened, the company that will take a responsibility to build it was a construction company from China. That a reason why the basic of Suramadu Bridge was famous by Steel Box Grider because the material is made in Tiongkok. It justified that a China Company was a professional partner while working. Then, for building this bridge is difficult enough because the material already ordered in Tiongkok and needed a time for fixing the material become a good utensils.
More over, many problems had faced by the company. Such as the first step to put the best pillar until to fix the grider and up roof bridge. The geologies and geographies situation also influence the build of Suramadu Bridge because the project location is on the top of sea. Then, it becomes a problem for accompany how to finish their project on time with a satisfied result. The funding that provided from Government foundation also quiet enough for building the bridge. Even though, the Government had supplied money more about 4.5 trilliyun rupiah. Based on the problem, while an economic crisis happened in Indonesia, it made the project stop for a moment.
In conclusion about the Suramadu bridge. It becomes a unique icon for Surabaya and Madura. It just connected the remote area to rural area. Then, Government had provided 4.5 trilliyun for paying the building bridge process. The work of this bridge had been taken by China company which famous by the professionalism working.
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Sentence: Not only country that has an unique icon but also cities such as Surabaya and Madura whose a Suramadu Bridge.
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Sentence: Then, it will be awarded as a longest bridge in Indonesia.
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Sentence: It justified that a China Company was a professional partner while working.
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Sentence: The geologies and geographies situation also influence the build of Suramadu Bridge because the project location is on the top of sea.
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Sentence: The work of this bridge had been taken by China company which famous by the professionalism working.
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Sentence: It just for symblozing about the wealthy of country.
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Sentence: Such as the first step to put the best pillar until to fix the grider and up roof bridge.
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Sentence: Then, Government had provided 4.5 trilliyun for paying the building bridge process.
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