A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
During the time of rapid economic growth and the improvement of human wealth some claim, that the worth of person in often associated with their social status and belongings. Sadly, I have to totally agree with this statement.
Firstly, more and more people seem to care about the brands they are using just because of the general opinion about them. For instance, many would buy an Apple iPhone instead of a much better and cheaper android phone – just because of a distinctive apple placed at the back of the device.
Secondly, it is often visible on the street how some people buy very ...
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Sentence: People have stopped to care for others years ago and the main principal in their lives seem to be me.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to others and years
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 12 15
No. of Words: 269 350
No. of Characters: 1235 1500
No. of Different Words: 159 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.05 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.591 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.41 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 82 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 51 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 30 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 20 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.417 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.946 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.667 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.348 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.655 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.06 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5