The restoration of the old building in the major cities throughout the world involves the enormous expenditure. This money would bring more benefits if it is used to provide new housing and road development. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is a fact that in big cities, the government has allocated a large amount of money to the restoration of ancient architectures. However, some people argue that it would be better if we use that money for developing new housing and better road system. Personally, I am of mixed opinion on this.
First of all, architecture is an expression of a city's value. As you tour the great cities of the world, you can read the story of these cities in their skylines. A rich story worth preserving. Through restoration we maintain our link to the past. It is indisputable that rehabilitation preserves th...
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