A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
We are cannot avoid the fact that the material possessions and social status are determine the worth of a person in this recent days. The way of the people to see the other has changed rather than in the past. Now, the economy level has taken the place in the society environment. This is causes by two reasons, such as the modern style of life and the culture disorder.
The development of the modern style in this recent life has influence the view of the people regard to values or worth of a person. People tend to compete each other to show their best style in terms of fashion and property. This reason has brought the people to own a good and expensive good. So, people in the society will be familiar with this habit, and then they will classify a person regard of it.
Culture has fluctuated from time to time, different time has different culture. The culture is determined by the style development of people in the society in this days. The modern style has influence the culture in community environment. which is also changes the people perspective regard values. This culture disorder plays a very significant role in influencing the way of a person to see the worth of other person.
At the end, I can conclude that a person’s worth in nowadays to be judged regarding to the economy level of that person. The economy level will classify the worth or values level of a person in the society environment.
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Sentence: We are cannot avoid the fact that the material possessions and social status are determine the worth of a person in this recent days.
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Sentence: This is causes by two reasons, such as the modern style of life and the culture disorder.
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Sentence: The culture is determined by the style development of people in the society in this days.
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Sentence: The modern style has influence the culture in community environment. which is also changes the people perspective regard values.
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Suggestion: Refer to people and perspective
Sentence: The economy level will classify the worth or values level of a person in the society environment.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to values and level
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