The society would benefit from a ban on all forms of advertising because it serves no useful purpose, and can even be damaging. Some people agree, some others disagree. Discuss both view.
It is a fact that advertisements are now widespread on mass media. Some people believe that these do not serve any beneficial purposes, and even spoil the society, there should be an advertising restriction to hinder their negative impacts on customers. Advocates of advertising argue that these commercials bring us much more values which are crucial in our ever-increasing society. Personally, I am of mixed opinion on that.
First of all, it is undeniable that advertisement can inform people about different products and services. There is an extensive diversity of goods in the market nowadays...
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- The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries 93
- In many countries, the quality of life in the large cities is worsening. What possibly can cause this problem? What measures can be taken to resolve it? 90
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Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.045 0.07
Be sensitive to use 'On the other hand', 'However','Nonetheless' in the essays.
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Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 18 15
No. of Words: 319 350
No. of Characters: 1608 1500
No. of Different Words: 203 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.226 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.041 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.936 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 110 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 89 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 64 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 46 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.722 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.355 7.5
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Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.274 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.473 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.045 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5