Popular events like the football World Cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tension releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way.
Today, it is evidently noticed that public awareness regarding national sports has substantially increased in comparison with a recent past. However, expressing feelings are, somehow, seen like an unsustainable situation for some, it could be seen as a valid means of national exultation.
A chief reason for objecting to this idea, from an opponent's point of view, is that when a city is immersed in excitement and emotions attributed to a success in international scene, it is more likely to see negative incidents like accidentally igniting people's properties and street chaos. In their belief, it is better to avoid these terrible situations rather than welcome these disruptive urban affairs.
Although the dissidents are not less, there are many people who support this opinion. The supporters have the notion that when a society learn how to deal with its emotions, weather pleasant or unpleasant, they behave more normally. As a result, the social trend will seem to be more frank and associations will be getting to know each another; Hence it could enhance social interactions and consequently life expectancy.
Last but not least, notion's joy is always counted as a adequate excuse for celebrating and having national festivals. If all the opportunities are eliminated merely because of dangerous probabilities, there will be only new year to be feasted.
Brief and to the point, respecting all explained theories, it's always wise to live in balance than extremes.
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- It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught or become a good sports person or musician.discuss both views and g 77
- In many countries, schools have severe problems with student behavior. What do you think are the causes of this? what solutions can you suggest? 69
- when a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out. It is possible to try and keep them alive.To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 67
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