More and more qualified people are moving from poor to rich countries to fill vacancies in specialist areas like engineering, computing and medicine.
Some people believe that by encouraging the movement of such people, rich countries are stealing from poor countries. Others feel that this is only part of the natural movement of workers around the world.
Do you agree or disagree?
Migration of skilled people is nowadays a phenomenon that implicates many migrants to move from undeveloped or developing countries towards developed and rich ones. In my opinion, this is a positive trend because only moving in more developed countries a professional or student can significantly improve his/her skills.
First of all, there are individual reasons in this phenomenon, like the natural need to always look for the best way possible to reach our own goals. According to this, the natural flow of people is from a worse place to a better one, whether the initial and last place are wi...
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