Please find attached the graph related to task 1 below and I will explain it in body. The statement of the graph is:The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 to 2004.Summarize the inf

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Please find attached the graph related to task 1 below and I will explain it in body. The statement of the graph is:
The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 to 2004.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph demonstrates the consumption pattern of people who use fish and other types of meat in their daily lives from the period 1979-2004. Over this 26 year period, it is notable that the chicken has been the most popular commodity while the consumption of fish is showing otherwise.

When we analyse the graph thoroughly, we come to know that the only meat which was showing an increasing trend was chicken which is accelerating from the level of 140 to 250 in 26 year period with some minor fluctuations from 1979 to 2004. Moreover the curve of beef and lamb enumerate that both are depreciati...

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