The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features , and make comparisons where relevant.
The following is an account of the life cycles of silkworms and its stages of production of silk cloth.
Usually, moths lay their eggs on mulberry leaves and in 10 days, these eggs turn into silkworms. These creatures fed on the leaves for their survival and development into cocoons. The development is in 2 stages. Firstly, after 4-6 weeks, silkworms are wrapped up around silk threads, leaving only their larva exposed. Then, the larva will be completely covered by silk thread in 3-8 days. This is when the silkworms have completely transformed into cocoons. In about 16 days, moths are produce...
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