Most experiences in our lives that seemed difficult at the time become valuable lessons for the future

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Most experiences in our lives that seemed difficult at the time become valuable lessons for the future.

People often say “No pain, no gain.” We hear many successful stories about people who overcame their barriers and limits in their life. After all, we respect and think about lessons from didactic story. In fact, we often recall our own experiences other than stories from other people when difficult situation happens to us. Thus, I agree with the statement with the following two reasons.

We learn from both easy and difficult experience since life makes us challenge all the time. But at the end it teaches perseverance. Let’s think about a little bird. It has to crack the egg to be born...

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