Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible. Other young adults prefer to live with their parents for a longer time. Which of these situations you think is better?
Young adults are sensitive group of people. There are lot of emotional and moral changes that happen to an individual during this period. This phase of life is considered as the molding phase of life. The attitude and the behavior to face problems ahead in life is developed during this time. Family plays an important role in influencing young adults. Family care and support, indeed would be beneficial during this period. But, extra care and concern would be rejected by young adults and would be considered mostly as an interference.
Independent life away from parents has its own advantages. ...
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