In many countries, a small number of people earn extremely high salaries. Some people believe that this is good for the country, but others think that governments should not allow salaries above a certain level.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, there are a numeric number of conutries offer high salaries to individuals, whereas there are a number of people this way is beneficial for the country, while others think that governoment should restrict high salaries to go under a specific level, it needn't to go over that limit.
On the one hand, there are a number of companies provide an excellent salary package to its employees. Hence, this is not bad to give a larg amount of money to staff. For example, i was told by one of my friends that there was a company in KSA has replaced one employee who worked in the top managment, as his salary was in average level no that much, so the company decided to replace him by someone else who has more experience than him, furtheremore, it had offered him a good package to work in its company. So this man had graduated from Western university in marketing field, he has worked hardly to increased company's profits. In addition, he had provided a good strategies to market their products out of the region, intead of being their items to be distributed in local districts only. For this reason, the company gave him that good salary due to the improvements which he brought to it. On other words, he deserved this sakary, isn't it?!
On the other hand, the idea of salary should be limited, it is not fair. Whereas, there are a lot of people deserve to get salary in a large scale, some people work a hard work, at the end, they should be rewarded for the achievement which they have done it for the adavantage of one's company. Other benefits that they may bring to their companies. In addition, other difficult professions need a good a salary to be paid for them, as a result, it will encourage them to do harder and solving complicated issues and putting a good plans to sort out a different problems at work.
In brief, putting a rule to specify the salary level is not successful one, as it will affect the employees who have a proffesional experience in different fields.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: needn't
...laries to go under a specific level, it neednt to go over that limit. On the one ha...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... amount of money to staff. For example, i was told by one of my friends that ther...
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Line 4, column 339, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...ent, as his salary was in average level no that much, so the company decided to re...
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Line 4, column 671, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'strategy'?
Suggestion: strategy
...ts. In addition, he had provided a good strategies to market their products out of the reg...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...n other words, he deserved this sakary, isnt it?! On the other hand, the idea of...
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...they have done it for the adavantage of ones company. Other benefits that they may b...
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Line 6, column 562, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'problem'?
Suggestion: problem
...ng a good plans to sort out a different problems at work. In brief, putting a rule t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, so, whereas, while, as to, for example, in addition, in brief, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1641.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58379888268 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59607832527 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533519553073 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.1685605852 49.4020404114 174% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.75 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8333333333 20.7667163134 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225824618132 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0838301120039 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669842945704 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145003413281 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0827409581389 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.88 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.