Some people believe that it is better to grow up children in cities rather than in the countryside. Discuss both the view and give your opinion.
Bringing up offspring with best facilities has been a challenge for the parents since ancient time. Some believe that villages are preferable place for rearing children; however, others strongly oppose the idea. Anyway, to my consideration city is the better place where young people can have better schooling, highly trained teachers, high-tech amusement facilities and the better medical services at the same time.
Country life has many charms to help children's development. First of all, the food from surrounding agro- based farms are definitely fresher than the one available in the city. For instance, preservative free food along with pollution free air boost up the physical growth of the toddlers to the teenagers live in rural area. Additionally, open fields with natural scenic beauty provide them enough space to play that in turn make them not only healthy but also creative.
On the other hand, city life offers schools with modern equipment and proficient teachers. For example, most of the city schools are facilitated with multimedia classroom which are rare in the schools situated in the rural area. It implies that, these high- tech devices and modern teaching methodologies help their cognitive skills to be developed and prepare them for a prosperous life. Last but not the least, better medical facilities add a different dimension to the urban life as without such vital services living could not only be risky but also life threatening.
Finally, although, bringing up a child in countryside has lots of pros, cities can make them adapted for future technological era by providing better education Therefore, I strongly believe that city should be the preferable place to the parents for the optimum growth and development of their children.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 23, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the best'.
Suggestion: with the best
Bringing up offspring with best facilities has been a challenge for the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, but, finally, first, however, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1497.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3085106383 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68440653193 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627659574468 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.9664639144 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.75 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0833333333 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146239331 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0507265571897 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439744183682 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0951272445709 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.052492632758 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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