Director and manager of an organization are often older people. Some people think that it is better for young people to be a leader. Do you agree or disagree?
There has been a tendency for elderly people hold some important position in a company for many years. However, these days many people suppose that the young should be given a chance to say their word and take charge in business. In my opinion, I agree that young people should be considered for being a leader of organization, but the role of the experienced still can be denied in any circumstance
The main reasons I agree with the idea that the young should be a leader are their flexibility and understanding. For instance, they are able to learn new method and technology that are useful for their work easily, which is obviously difficult for the old to handle. In addition, employees usually keen on working in a comfortable and creative environment which can be organized perfectly if the director or manager are young and hungry because they share the same thought and have sympathy with others.
However, there are some benefits for the old leader when they have a good sense of responsibility, especially in a large company. Firstly, their experiences in management and doing multi- tasking work will help the company get into gear smoothly. Secondly, they do not hesitate when making a decision while young people usually afraid of deciding because they don't want to turn down others opinion a lot.
In conclusion, I think that each company should have both of two kinds of leader: the young and the experienced. They will support each other and together they will contribute to the company in different ways and help the company become more and more successful.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, while, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1317.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91417910448 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6657229316 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563432835821 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.5310534131 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.7 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.4 7.06120827912 190% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289322882369 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108426118008 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646712454147 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164659775248 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0834697964101 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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