Today is the media portrays our youth as a lazy and disrespectful, do you think thay out our youth is really worse that their elder is or it is just appoint criticism.
Yes, it is true that our youth is disrespectful and lazy but no as mush as media portrays. Media is the institution which display the positivity and negativity of the society.Media show's the country face to the world,so media should be very careful and responsible of what action they are doing and what is impact of that action in the society.
The main reasons of our youth laziness and disrespectfullness are:, First reason is parents not giving attention to their children during nurture, Second is the company of bad friends,Third reason is unmature teachers, and the fourth reason is media itself. Parent must responsibly monitor their children.Parents ought to set curfew on their children bad activities especially when they are turning to teen age group.Teachers are not playing good role in the current milieu in youth good behavior.Nowadays teachers only focus on studies activity of the student but in the past teacher also monitor student behavior along with studies.Bad friend is one of the reason just like "a black fish spoils the whole water" bad friend in the society create a chain of badness in the country through facebook, twitter etc. Its not the solution that media portrays youth as lazy and disrespectful but to carry the situation into worse. Media has to set different show's which for sure play a vital role in the good behavior of the youth. Government ought to conduct different seminars and activities on youth good behavior and activeness and media has to coverage it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, third, as to, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1262.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.048 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93366664773 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 381.6 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 156.466988107 49.4020404114 317% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 180.285714286 106.682146367 169% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.7142857143 20.7667163134 172% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.28571428571 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22460847974 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125151219345 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628052782159 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175097445535 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00473611246452 0.056905535591 8% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.2 13.0946893788 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.41 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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