Your colleague from a different town is coming next month and you are moving out of your current accommodation. Write a letter to the colleague to recommend they move into your house and say
– Why are you moving to another house?
– Describe your present accommodation.
– Explain why it will suit your colleague.
Dear ABC
I am writing this letter with reference to your letter, which I received yesterday. I am very excited after reading your letter, that you are coming to my town.
You will be happy to know that I have recently purchased a new house, even though I don't want to but my heart changed and bought a new accommodation.
My present accommodation is quite well, especially its facade made up with glass and solar tiles. Apart from that interior is made up with wood and has massive windows that the sun can pour in.
I recommend that you will stay at this accommodation as it is nearest to the office and has every facility available. I know that you are health conscious and people in that area are your neck of the wood. And there are too many options for you to visit the amusement park.
In case if you require any other information do not hesitate to call me at 995111689 at any time. I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Sincerely
XYZ
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2018-05-22 | Ielts2018_attempt 3 | 73 | view |
| 2017-04-28 | ridi | 56 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 85, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ly purchased a new house, even though I dont want to but my heart changed and bought...
^^^^
Line 5, column 130, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'new accommodation'.
Suggestion: new accommodation
...want to but my heart changed and bought a new accommodation. My present accommodation is quite w...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 275, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ns for you to visit the amusement park. In case if you require any other informa...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, well, apart from, with reference to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 791.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49431818182 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48158897335 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.653409090909 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 247.5 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4870319381 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.1 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 4.34317383033 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215591535626 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0782566287503 0.0766984524023 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694596360614 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108352745131 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0833604111897 0.0580467560999 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 8.71597938144 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.