Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live?Use specific examples to support your answer.

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Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live?Use specific examples to support your answer.

Earlier cooking was a time consuming job and hours were spent for preparing a single meal but now the situation has changed. It has become easier and faster with the introduction of machines like juicer, grinder, microwave, etc. This has resulted in some changes in people’s lives and the same would be discussed in upcoming paragraphs.

Firstly, the most dominating change is that now women have plenty of time for other activities. Now they can go out for jobs and earn money. Eventually, they become an earning member of family and this has led to addition in source of income. Moreover, men can also cook for themselves as cooking has become simpler. They no longer need to depend on female members of family. Hence, cooking of today’s age has reduced discrimination among males and females, both live in a balanced way.

Secondly, women are able to cut out the time for their own exciting hobbies. For instance, they have started to devote their leisure time by going to beauty parlors, salons, and health clubs. They have enough time for relaxing themselves in meditation centers or at home. In addition to this, they spend their time with family and help their children in studies. So, they are quite happy because of changed cooking techniques.

Finally, the eating habits of people has also changed with availability of different apparatus as mentioned above. Now its very easy for people to make every delicious dish at home in shorter period of time. they can have variety in their three meals of a single day with a little efforts and hard work. So, it has relatively made it more effective than before as people no need to go out for their favorite food.

From above discussion it is clear that cooking has become very convenient and has revolutionized the lifestyles of everyone. It has especially brought changes in women’s lives for good and can also be considered a positive development for both males and females equally.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 193, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...every delicious dish at home in shorter period of time. they can have variety in their three m...
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Line 7, column 209, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...dish at home in shorter period of time. they can have variety in their three meals o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for instance, in addition, in short

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1638.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94864048338 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63791727196 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580060422961 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.9949494898 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.9 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.55 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.7 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120881202131 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0402903854716 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394698395731 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0786657373405 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0344647353856 0.056905535591 61% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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