Do you agree or disagree with following statement: it is better to use printed material such as books and articles to do research that it is to use the internet.
Students sometimes have to do researches and come back with enough information and facts. For this purpose, they use internet-based resources or they go the library and start to find out some crucial information. Of course, both have some advantages and disadvantages. Anyway, if I have to do some researches then I would prefer books and articles.
Firstly, all internet sources can be edited by another user which is not trustworthy. Users can enter some phony facts, which could result with hard consequences. For instance, you think that you have finished your research and you go no further to check its uprightness. Then it is time to graded and you professor read it to find out that your facts are untrustworthy. People, who changed the information on the internet, do it not because they know the fact like that, but the sake of a joke without thinking the result. If you want really reliable facts, try to avoid using the internet.
Secondly, books are a big treasure and you can gain more than needed information from very deep. You don’t need to go there but books will provide you with deepest facts. For instance, you are going to have some researchers about literature, about a poem. From the internet, you will have some info about just poem and author but you will have difficulty in trusting it. However, books will have full reliable and deep knowledge about author, and information. I just want to reveal a secret. While you are searching something from the book, you will hammer a big part of the knowledge that you gain from the book, however from the internet, the situation is vice verse.
In conclusion, to pass your semester and gain enough knowledge try to prefer the book. The book is the best friend of people. Only a one will say the truth.
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| 2017-05-24 | Sabina Guliyeva | 60 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, first, firstly, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, then, while, for instance, in conclusion, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 309.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78317152104 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63641844819 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540453074434 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.6430568274 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.9 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.45 20.6045352989 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231951406556 0.236089414692 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0718190072103 0.076458572812 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522406788076 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138507760158 0.150856017488 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537427521193 0.0645574589148 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 11.7677419355 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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