Some parents forbid young children from owning smart phones (cell phones with Internet access), while others disagree and believe that they are important tools for keeping in touch. Which point of view do you think is better, and why?

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 90, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ives without our smart phones and hence i would definitely reckon that they are...
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Line 1, column 108, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...mart phones and hence i would definitely reckon that they are incredibly importa...
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Line 1, column 121, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd hence i would definitely reckon that they are incredibly important tools for ...
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Line 1, column 181, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: And
...y important tools for keeping and touch.And i can support my point of view by provi...
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Line 1, column 185, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...portant tools for keeping and touch.And i can support my point of view by providi...
^
Line 2, column 88, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , frieds
...tunity to communicate with our relatives,frieds from all over the worlds. For example,m...
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Line 2, column 132, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , my
...ds from all over the worlds. For example,my brother lives in Warsaw and it is extre...
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Line 2, column 257, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... for a long time. By merely using Skype i can see him, talk to him and it is abso...
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Line 3, column 12, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , our
...alk with whoever is needed. Furthermore,our smart phones have made a great impact o...
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Line 4, column 63, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: We
...phones enable us to entertain ourselves.We can watch movies, read multitude books,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, furthermore, hence, if, so, as to, for example

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.0286738351 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1216.0 1977.66487455 61% => OK
No of words: 252.0 407.700716846 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8253968254 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76200738726 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 212.727598566 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587301587302 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 618.680645161 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2229722216 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.8571428571 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.28571428571 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22653299638 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0745255357346 0.076458572812 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464241603215 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128626992096 0.150856017488 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392782550281 0.0645574589148 61% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.

Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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