The college Years
The college years are the best time in the person's life
Do you agree or disagree with this statement ?
I really agree with this statement, “The college years are the best time in the person's life". Everybody has good memories of theirs college life. I also have wonderful memories of my college days which make my college years best time in my life.
After passing the 10th standard everybody has become the part of the college life. First time entering in to college some people feels nervous while other feels interesting. I remember my first college day that was so scary for me because I really unaware of the situation happened with me. I not knew my division, mistakenly I seat in to wrong division. To find out my right division I had to take lots of effort like first search my division then my class teacher to told that I was present one first day .However that things taught me be prepare before going to start any new thing. Thank God that such things never happened with me in my entire college life. The college life teaches all the experiences which I use in life.
college years are the best time for me because I used to participate in each and every competition like technical quiz, seminar competition , programming competition not only technical I participated in culture activity like dancing and dram . All this activities kept me enthusiastic. Everybody called me the "Superwomen" because I always ready with the my practical and the write-ups. I have good friend group in the college. We were all girls. we all girls enjoyed lots by bunking the lectures, by cracking the jokes. I also remember that We were also arrange the trip. Every day I learned new things. College time provide me good and bad experiences which make me strong to fight with the world. Experiences like how travel without any help, how to behave at the time of interview, how to help to others, how to make new friends. That days are amazing for me.
I never forget that college days because each and every moment in the college is best for me.
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Sentence: Everybody has good memories of theirs college life.
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Sentence: First time entering in to college some people feels nervous while other feels interesting.
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some people feels nervous while other feels interesting.
some people feel nervous while other feel interesting.
Sentence: I not knew my division, mistakenly I seat in to wrong division.
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Sentence: To find out my right division I had to take lots of effort like first search my division then my class teacher to told that I was present one first day .However that things taught me be prepare before going to start any new thing.
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Sentence: All this activities kept me enthusiastic.
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Sentence: College time provide me good and bad experiences which make me strong to fight with the world.
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