Creative artists should always be given the freedom to express their own ideas(in words, pictures, music or film) in whichever way they wish. There should be no government restrictions on what they do.
Since ample creating space plays a irreplaceable place in the realm of art, I agree with the idea that creative artists should always be given the freedom to express their own ideas through various ways. By this I mean, they need spacious room to perform their genius adequately. So there is no doubt that they should not be limited by the government.
While it is undeniable that the government may worry the issue that some inappropriate works will have an adverse influence on the public, but from my point of view, people are entirely competent to distinguish the right from the wrong. The fact is that they are qualified enough to play a role as supervisors. Additionally, it is universally accepted that “audiences have acute eyes”, so I am firmly convinced that evil can never defeat justice. Therefore, we can't reject audacious creation for fear that the potential unfavorable factors would exert a detrimental impact on common people.
In the meanwhile, creative artists are blessed with sharp perception, excellent thinking ability and superb aesthetic judgment, who help humans eliminate puzzles, express emotions and promote the ideology level. Given the glorious thought is carried by the colorful forms, including words, paintings, music and films, all these remarkable works are outcomes of their fantastic ideas. As the creation of gorgeous pieces asks for adequate soil, sufficient water and plentiful air, if the government restrict on what they do, the chance of the birth of masterpieces will be decreased. Accordingly, the authority is supposed to attach great importance to the talented masters' liberty in composing.
In conclude, I concede that the freedom of expressing ensures the gifted production. In order to boost the development and prosperity of art field, it is strongly recommended that government allow the freedom on creating.Consequently, there will surely be increasing number of precious treasure of art coming out in the near future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 34, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
Since ample creating space plays a irreplaceable place in the realm of art...
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Line 3, column 472, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...can never defeat justice. Therefore, we cant reject audacious creation for fear that...
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Line 5, column 665, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'masters'' or 'master's'?
Suggestion: masters'; master's
...attach great importance to the talented masters liberty in composing. In conclude, I...
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Line 7, column 222, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Consequently
...overnment allow the freedom on creating.Consequently, there will surely be increasing number...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, consequently, if, may, so, therefore, while, i mean, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1678.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34394904459 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02991963565 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.656050955414 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.8364898688 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.076923077 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1538461538 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07692307692 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345081400717 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0955264327815 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0976651289265 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181901104453 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.141763247905 0.056905535591 249% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.01 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.