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The best ideas arise from a passionate interest in commonplace things.
An idea leads to an innovation. Once the brain had started making ideas, traces a new discovery will appear. Scientists, do innovations and discoveries through the engendered idea in their brilliant mind. But brain is able to produce an idea, related to some discovery, only with the help of some information it already has. If a person thinks about eating an apple then at the same time his brain makes a picture of a thing which is red in color, approximately circular in shape. The best idea will arise in a person if s/he has interest in understanding things or can also be said as passionate int...
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Sentence: Archimedes concluded this principle when he had gone to take bath and when he inserted his leg into a water tub, he feel an upward buoyant force on the basis of which he explained the theory.
Description: The fragment he feel an is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace feel with verb, past tense
Sentence: Furthermore, commonplace things can leads to arise only if someone really had passionate interest in it, and on the basis of this a very famous theory has been proved by a great Scientist when Apple fall on his head.
Description: A modal auxillary is not usually followed by a verb, present tense, 3rd person singular
Suggestion: Refer to can and leads
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No. of Words: 623 350 (write the essay in half an hour)
Introduction and conclusion could be shorter.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.5 out of 6
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 13 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 26 15
No. of Words: 623 350
No. of Characters: 2901 1500
No. of Different Words: 267 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.996 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.657 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.577 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 192 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 131 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 90 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 65 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 23.962 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.642 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.462 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.291 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.492 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.155 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5