Random stop-and-search procedures are necessary to preserve safety in modern urban neighborhoods
Many people believe that random stop and search procedures are necessary to perserve safety. They claim that such procedures will help the ruling government control the country and ensure that every person is safe and every place is free of terrorism.
However I believe that these procedures are against the simplest human rights of freedom and justice. I consider it as an interference in the private life of a person if you stop him and search without any evidence to suspect him.
Search and stop procedures may be abused by the ruling government where the ruling party people may use these forces to have political gains that they do not deserve or to terrify their political competitors. It may be also used against certain race in the society like what happened in South Africa before when it was used against the black people.
To sum up, The claim that the illegal Stop and Search Procedures help to face the terrorism in some countries seems true but it can not be generalized such that these procedures are applied without limits or rules.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2012-08-15 | mohamedabdelhakim | 50 | view |
- In surveys Mason City residents rank water sports (swimming, boating, and fishing) among their favorite recreational activities. The Mason River flowing through the city is rarely used for these pursuits, however, and the city park department devotes litt 48
- The following appeared in a memorandum from the owner of the Juniper Cafe,a small, local coffee shop in the downtown area of a small American city:"We must reduce overhead here at the cafe. Instead of opening at 6 a.m. weekdays,we will now open at 8 a.m. 63
- The following appeared as a letter to the editor from a Central Plaza store owner."Over the past two years, the number of shoppers in Central Plaza has been steadily decreasing while the popularity of skateboarding has increased dramatically. Many Central 60
- As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate 53
- Claim: In any field—business, politics, education, government—those in power should step down after five years.Reason: The surest path to success for any enterprise is revitalization through new leadership.Write a response in which you discuss the extent 72
Sentence: Many people believe that random stop and search procedures are necessary to perserve safety.
Error: perserve Suggestion: preserve
flaws:
No. of Sentences: 7 15
No. of Words: 181 350
No. of Characters: 859 1500
No. of Different Words: 111 200
Need more words.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 7 15
No. of Words: 181 350
No. of Characters: 859 1500
No. of Different Words: 111 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.668 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.746 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.4 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 63 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 42 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 22 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 17 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 25.857 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.202 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.714 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.457 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.757 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.075 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5