In many countries, people now wear Western clothes (suits, jeans) rather than traditional clothing.
Why? Is this a positive or negative development.
In modern society, Western garments are more preferred than traditional garments. There are several reasons for this problems and in my opinion, there are both positive and negative effects.
A few reason can be given to justify the trend of attiring more Western clothing than traditional clothing. First, wearing modern clothes such as suits and jeans is more convenience than dressing traditional dress. Almost tradition outfit waste people a lot of time to dress, the option to dress Western attire can help people save a great deal of time. Furthermore, buying some traditional attire cost the more great deal of money than buying some kinds of suits and jeans. For instance, in Viet Nam, if you need to buy an "ao dai" which is the traditional dress of Viet Nam you have to pay at least 3000000 VND while the money you have to pay for a jean is about 500000 VND.
On the one hand, the option to wear Western clothes instead of traditional clothes can be extremely positive. Wearing modern dress make people feel easy to integrate into society. On the other hand, wearing suits and jeans instead of wearing traditional clothing lose a good chance to introduce people and culture in their countries to their friends in the world. For example, when my sister watches some shows of actors in Korean dress Hanbok, she really likes it and then she decides to visit Korean in next month.
In conclusion, it is clear that there are various reasons why people tend to wear Western outfit instead of traditional garments and this could bring both negative and positive impacts.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun reason seems to be countable; consider using: 'few reasons'.
Suggestion: few reasons
... both positive and negative effects. A few reason can be given to justify the trend of at...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, really, so, then, while, at least, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1327.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91481481481 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42316495416 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533333333333 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0200844835 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.583333333 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8333333333 7.06120827912 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314350573332 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127818087646 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0736781709224 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207570592493 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359503820342 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.