Writing task 1 (a letter)
You have just moved to a new apartment. Write a letter to your friend and say
– Why did you move?
– Describe your new home.
– Invite him/her to your new place.
Dear Priya,
Sorry, I haven’t written to you for so long. I have been quite busy over the last few months. How are you doing? I hope everything is okay.
We just moved to our new home. As you probably know, I had been searching for a new home for a while. My old home was a long way away from my office. In fact, the daily commute used to take nearly two hours. That's we decided to buy an apartment in the suburb.
It is a spacious apartment with two bedrooms and a balcony. Also it is only a 5 minutes’ walk from our offices. Of course, the best thing about this home is its balcony. We can host small parties there. Also it is a great place to unwind after spending a stressful day at work.
Well, why do I have to rant on and on about my new residence? Can’t you visit us over the weekend and see it for yourself? It would be fun to have you here.
Looking forward to your visit.
Your Sincerely,
Divya
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| 2020-07-21 | yaldaasgari | 73 | view |
| 2017-07-23 | jay.patel.4545 | 78 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 209, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
... commute used to take nearly two hours. Thats we decided to buy an apartment in the s...
^^^^^
Line 6, column 61, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...rtment with two bedrooms and a balcony. Also it is only a 5 minutes' walk from ...
^^^^
Line 6, column 209, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...lcony. We can host small parties there. Also it is a great place to unwind after spe...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, so, well, while, in fact, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 759.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.21666666667 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34491174911 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.661111111111 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.360824742268 554% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6804123711 150% => OK
Sentence length: 9.0 16.3608247423 55% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 16.7798190357 44.8134815571 37% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 39.9473684211 76.5299724578 52% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 9.47368421053 16.8248392259 56% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.47368421053 4.34317383033 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.94845360825 279% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228844268259 0.216113520407 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0640685173354 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0728252766744 0.0603063233224 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110643943026 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533652743641 0.0580467560999 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 3.2 8.37731958763 38% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 87.72 70.7449484536 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 3.3 7.45979381443 44% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.42 8.71597938144 62% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.63 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 3.5 8.62886597938 41% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 5.6 8.54432989691 66% => OK
text_standard: 4.0 8.15463917526 49% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.