Nowadays the crime rate among young people is increasing. Why do you think this is happening? What can be done by parents and teachers to reduce it?
Criminality as a means of power has become common in our society which is attractive to the juveniles. I think, less leisure time sports activities is the main reason for this, at the same time, moral crisis is another cause. Father, mother and an educator can take various initiatives, such as encourage to take part in various sports such football, cricket etc., and motivate them to do good deeds, showing examples of good people who are morally strong, to get rid of crime problem.
Primarily, sports are important for the mental growth of a child but in modern time young children are passing their time by playing video games which is not good for proper psychological development. For example, if a child plays football in the field with other children then he will be able to differentiate between positive and negative things. So, socialization is important to check crimes.
On the other hand, in the society immoral people are generally rich and powerful, for this reason, it creates the image that if one is moral, he will be suppressed and remain as poor. For example, politicians in many countries are not morally strong and involved in various criminal works but able to achieve significant portfolio of the state which attracts youth a lot but it has to be changed by promoting moral and successful people.
To conclude, leisure activities and proper ethical education is important to refrain the young people from criminal activities. Parents and tutors have a great role in this regard as they are the first idol for a child. I believe that if it is possible to promote these things effectively, then there will be less crime.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 306, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'taking'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'encourage' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: taking
... various initiatives, such as encourage to take part in various sports such football, c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, then, as to, for example, i think, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1370.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89285714286 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65709485364 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592857142857 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.8510053319 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.545454545 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4545454545 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.36363636364 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122399754048 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0446456183132 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0295203065098 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0770574911425 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0357915314922 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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