You have decided to leave your current employment. Write a letter to your employer. Include the following in your letter:
Write him back and say:
Explain why you are writing
Explain why you have decided to leave the company
Tell your employer what you plan to do after leaving your present employment.
Dear Sir,
My name is Divya Patel. I have been working in your company as a Business Development Executive since 2001. I am writing to inform you about my decision that I would not be able to continue with your company anymore. As per the company obligations, I am giving one month notice prior to leaving, dated from today.
It was a really hard decision for me because of the love and gratitude I have received during my stay at your company. It was a perfect and conducive working environment that has an undeniable impression on my mind. However, I fell tired after working 17 years of my life and now need some time to relax, explore and fulfil my hidden wishes.
I would like to start my own boutique that was always a dream of me to fulfil. Now, I have no more responsibility on my shoulders and have sufficient funds to accomplish my milestone.
Yours Faithfully,
Divya
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, My name is Divya Patel. I have been work...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ient funds to accomplish my milestone. Yours Faithfully, Divya
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 733.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 159.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61006289308 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69141241785 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.672955974843 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 238.5 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.4052543375 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.3 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.3 4.34317383033 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137808063025 0.216113520407 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633893462087 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695686881908 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0826494692935 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0487101108942 0.0580467560999 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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