You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager.
Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In the letter:
» explain why you were at the restaurant
» describe the problems
» write about the action you want the manager to take
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to you to express my dissatisfaction with the meal we were served at your restaurant yesterday.
My mother has come to visit me at that time. She wanted to take some Korean food so I decided to take her and my family to your restaurant whose menu includes some delicious Korean recipes I have ever had some times before. Moreover, it is not far from my house so we can walk there in a short time.
We ordered 2 dishes of Chinese noodle and 2 dishes of chicken fried rice. After an unexpected long wait, we received 2 dishes of Chinese noodles and 2 dishes of fish fried rice instead. I mentioned this problem with the waiter. He said to check it and come back soon. But after 10 minutes, I had to ask for checking again because of receiving no response. Finally, he said that it was the mistake of table number and suggested we had fish fried rice because there were so many customer at that time and it would take another long time to prepare the right dishes we ordered without any compensation.
I will appreciate if you could take an action about this inconvenience. There will be no complaint about long waiting if you hire more staff to serve. Also, it would be great if you offer some discount coupons in case of your mistake.
I hope you will take this matter seriously.
Yours faithfully,
Thu Hang
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 473, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun customer seems to be countable; consider using: 'many customers'.
Suggestion: many customers
...d fish fried rice because there were so many customer at that time and it would take another ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1116.0 937.175257732 119% => OK
No of words: 248.0 206.0 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46128979411 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588709677419 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 353.7 290.88556701 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.2840415512 44.8134815571 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.4 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5333333333 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.4 4.34317383033 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159826061415 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0577978899137 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672391211662 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122108933613 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.097639122127 0.0580467560999 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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