The graph below shows hoe prices of "high-tech gadgets" changed over time in Somecountry.
The graph compares prices of two "high-tech gadgets" changed over time in Somecountry. It can be clearly seen that, peak point of both two type of gadgets was at the most beginning in July-December of 2004 year and the bottom point of both gadgets was at the very end of the graph in the second half of 2006.
At the beginning, navigation system gadgets costed 4000 US dollars and price for smartphones was 3000 US dollars. In the next five month period of time navigation gadgets were more expensive than cellphones, costing just over 3000 US dollars, where smartphones' price was just unred 3000 US dollars. After that, both lines reached the same point by slight decrease of GPS price and consistent increase of cellphones' price between June and December of 2005. After 2005, price for smartphones went down to just above 2500 US dollars, while navigation gadgets' price went up rapidly to 3500 US dollars. But in 2006, smartphone price stayed constant and price for navigation system gadgets fell again stopping at the same level with cellphones.
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- Financial education should be a mandatory component of the school program.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 56
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- The graph below shows hoe prices of "high-tech gadgets" changed over time in Somecountry. 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 138, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...3000 US dollars. In the next five month period of time navigation gadgets were more expensive ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, second, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 890.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68729658467 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561797752809 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0948610851 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.142857143 112.824112599 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4285714286 22.9334400587 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.14285714286 5.23603664747 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264565136962 0.215688989381 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.167666613544 0.103423049105 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.228249150804 0.0843802449381 271% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.242324057642 0.15604864568 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120039055973 0.0819641961636 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.2329268293 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.