In Some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their level of health and fitness is decreasing. What are the causes and solutions ?
Obesity is becoming a biggest issue in many countries. The level of health and fitness is decreasing day by day. There is a highly intense underlying etiology of this issue. Some measures can be taken to mitigate this issue.
There are few prominent causes to this issue. Firstly, the food habits are the major reason of overweight nowadays. People's busy life style forced them to depend on junk food rather than making food at home. Many times they choose less nutritional, but more calories food, which invites health problems by the passing of time. Secondly, lack of physical activities noticed in this busy era. A small number of people attached to games and sports. To illustrate , large number of people are ignoring physical activities in these days, which is very risky sign toward their health and fitness. Thirdly, the use of transport vehicles is increased than its estimate. People become enough lazy that they find it to reached at the top of mountain by walking half a mile. At the end, in this stressful life many people take help of alcohol and other drugs or medicine to come out of stress, which leads more than one health problems , specially weight gaining .
On the other hand, some actions can be taken to solve this worldwide problem. People should concentrate more on nutritional food or home made food instead of heavy calories and unhygienic food. Moreover individuals should make exercises and sports activities a part of their daily life. Activities like running, doing gym, play outdoor games provides a chance to fatty people to maintain their health and fitness level. Furthermore , people who take drugs regularly should change their habits , if they want to change their life in certain ways, because drugs can't challenge sports in the matter of relaxation or came out from stress. Also awareness regarding health problems and fat is very necessary among the humans. It is a responsibility of Administration to arrange public awareness camps in every city. Lastly, it is impossible to stop private transportation in this competitive word because life is enough fast, however we can try to reduce the unnecessary use of such vehicles.
To Put the matter into a nutshell, individuals must change their life style in certain ways to challenge such problems. We can say that it is impossible to stop overweight, and maintain health and fitness without such practices.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
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Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2005.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 397.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05037783375 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61847677728 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556675062972 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 626.4 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
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Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
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Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.7384179612 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.5416666667 106.682146367 78% => OK
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Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
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Sentence topic coherence: 0.0518116273076 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049197142362 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116804045883 0.151304729494 77% => OK
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Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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