claim:when planning courses,educator should take in to account the interests and suggestions of their students.
reason:students are more motivated to learn when they are interested in what they are studying
the responce of an issue that i wold agree most of the time successfully most of the time.the student have being motivated when they have kind of intrest in what they study.let me illustate by the student life in colleges and schools,being the teachers have to track the student for his/her future.
according to the student role an major importance of studies. being persuaded in the schools and colleges, the teachers are educators have guidance them in the right way to hit the target successfully.so,as the present situation the government have take responsible to guide the awareness of each course before seeking the career.unless until todays generation have eager to know some thing new discovaries by the world.
present environment have to impose to the student and have to be weaken at the same time streanthen.the educators have to responsible that being the intrest of student explains the possible ways to get good future.the present sector,they were engineers,doctores,lawyers,collectors,ips,business persons,etc.so,in atleast every home one of the desired cateogeory.dont mean that all of this may have different sector of them majorly i have list out.so,they make guide the people in their families to right benificial in the track records of his career.
though,they were many scientist and famous persons have come one intrest in their life by passed out many faulty situations.as,the abraham linckon the former president of us,who eradicated the povery by the rule time.not only him they were billgates the one of the richhest miliniear in the world came by normal status.being the greate intrest in his career.like wise may have to moralize the student of ones famous persons history in schools and colleges.
finally,by the better motivated student have chance to lead an better life.not mean always.that the inspiration is an devine thaing that can influenced by ones mind.so,the educator have to teach the student make edroitfull in the feild of study.
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- as we acquire more knowledge,things do not become more comprehensible,but more complex and mysterious. 35
Sentence: according to the student role an major importance of studies. being persuaded in the schools and colleges, the teachers are educators have guidance them in the right way to hit the target successfully.so,as the present situation the government have take responsible to guide the awareness of each course before seeking the career.unless until todays generation have eager to know some thing new discovaries by the world. present environment have to impose to the student and have to be weaken at
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Sentence: finally,by the better motivated student have chance to lead an better life.not mean always.that the inspiration is an devine thaing that can influenced by ones mind.so,the educator have to teach the student make edroitfull in the feild of study.
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Sentence: the responce of an issue that i wold agree most of the time successfully most of the time.the student have being motivated when they have kind of intrest in what they study.let me illustate by the student life in colleges and schools,being the teachers have to track the student for his/her future.
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Sentence: according to the student role an major importance of studies. being persuaded in the schools and colleges, the teachers are educators have guidance them in the right way to hit the target successfully.so,as the present situation the government have take responsible to guide the awareness of each course before seeking the career.unless until todays generation have eager to know some thing new discovaries by the world. present environment have to impose to the student and have to be weaken at
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Sentence: the same time streanthen.the educators have to responsible that being the intrest of student explains the possible ways to get good future.the present sector,they were engineers,doctores,lawyers,collectors,ips,business persons,etc.so,in atleast every home one of the desired cateogeory.dont mean that all of this may have different sector of them majorly i have list out.so,they make guide the people in their families to right benificial in the track records of his career.
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Sentence: though,they were many scientist and famous persons have come one intrest in their life by passed out many faulty situations.as,the abraham linckon the former president of us,who eradicated the povery by the rule time.not only him they were billgates the one of the richhest miliniear in the world came by normal status.being the greate intrest in his career.like wise may have to moralize the student of ones famous persons history in schools and colleges.
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Sentence: finally,by the better motivated student have chance to lead an better life.not mean always.that the inspiration is an devine thaing that can influenced by ones mind.so,the educator have to teach the student make edroitfull in the feild of study.
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