n some countries, 18 old are allowed to drive whereas some countries do not allow people to drive until they attain an age of 25.
As per you, what is the right age at which people should be allowed to drive a vehicle?
The majority of the globe - including many countries in Europe, Africa, South America and the Middle East - sets the minimum unsupervised driving age at 18, with a handful of countries, such as the UK and Ireland, at 17. Learning to drive is part of growing up. But finding the perfect minimum age for driving could be as complicated as the teenage personality itself.
Various debates have been going on across several international forums to re-think the minimum driving age of people. To begin with, most of youngsters are carried away by a passion to ride at high speed and lead to serious accidents. For instance, in country like India where roads are shabby and easy to cause vehicle collision, speeding, especially by youngsters is a common factor for serious fatalities. Secondly, young people are not mature enough and get restless when waiting to drive. So, when they get the chance to drive, they get reckless making it unsafe for other drivers and pedestrians. Finally, the younger they are more dangerous it is for the community.
However, I have a strong opinion that driving age to start driving should be increased from 18 to 25. To start with, it is true that person with over 21 age would more likely to treat driving with more respect. They will have more brains, life experience and more responsible towards life. Moreover, there would be a fall in fatalities arising from motor case use. Also, fewer drivers on the road will reduce congestion.
I think everyone should open their eyes to see this is an opportunity to save more youngsters from harming themselves and others.
In conclusion, driving age should be increased to 25 as people at this age starts taking more responsibilities and can take more precautions while driving. Also older teens may be encouraged to exercise more and learn healthier habits since motor vehicle isn’t available to them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 133, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the youngsters') or simply say ''most youngsters''.
Suggestion: most of the youngsters; most youngsters
...m driving age of people. To begin with, most of youngsters are carried away by a passion to ride a...
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Line 5, column 157, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...an take more precautions while driving. Also older teens may be encouraged to exerci...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, it is true, to begin with, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1570.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96835443038 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67128323539 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613924050633 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0910358455 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.3529411765 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5882352941 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.64705882353 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274352025001 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0875550151214 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0750438571352 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148661905481 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0619890642567 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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