Prison is a common way in most countries to solve prblems of crime. However, a more effective solution is to provide people with better education. To what extent do you agree?
Crime commitment is putting red alert on society and government. People believe that better education is better solution against crime comparing to the prison. In my opinion, I am fully agree on this idea.
Education helps reduce crime in various way. At school, education can be considered as a vaccine to prevent crime from occuring. By strict rules in classes, children are encouraged to behave well while studying. If someone violates the law, they gets punished. As the results, children obeyance is insure, and they will keep it going as they grow older. In prison, education helps the criminals in rehabitating themselves. For example, instead of getting punished while undergoing the sentences, education will help the guilty learn vocational skills, which prepare for them to find a job when they finish their imprisonment. As the result, they are prevented from offending once more.
In addition, although being a popular solution to end crime, prisons are not effective as it should be. Prison is a punishment for the crime, and it can not solve the problem of the roots, such as motivation. Consequently, it can not prevent the guilt from happening. Furthermore, imprisonment not only stop but also may prompts the guilty to reoffending.
In conclusion, good education has better result in combating crimes in comparison with prisons.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
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Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'get'
Suggestion: get
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'insured'.
Suggestion: insured
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, if, may, so, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1139.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 217.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24884792627 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85104150081 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.654377880184 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 347.4 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.5222534902 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.1875 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5625 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9375 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173434186134 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.057219942573 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660428698053 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122669576188 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527220284591 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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