The bar charts below give information about travel from and to the UK, and about the most popular countries for UK residents to visit.
The charts reveal the number of people travel from and to the UK from 1979 to 1999 and the most popular destinations visited by UK resident in 1999. In the first chart, the x-axis indicates the year while the y-axis indicates the number of people. In the second chart, the horizontal axis shows the million of UK visitor while the vertical axis shows the country destinations.
Generally, the number of people travel from and to the UK increase from 1979 to 1999 and the number of UK residents visited abrod was higher than people who visited UK through the years. In the terms of destination, UK people tended to visit France which was around 11 Millions people in 1999.
The growth of people visited to UK rose steadily form just around 9 Millions people in 1979 to 28 Millions people in 1999. The significant growth was shown in 1989 for the figure of UK residents visited abroad. It was started from 1986 which was around 20 Millions people in 1999.
In the second chart, Spain was the second choice of UK residents to be visited which was around 9 Millions people, followed by USA, Greece and Turkey which were approximately 3 millions visitor in 1999.
To sum up, there was no significant changing in the terms of people travelling from and to the UK and also the countries as destinations.
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