407 do you like the transport system in your country?

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Post dates	Users	rates	Contents
2019-08-30	rushabh71		Check this speaking
2019-07-09	Adithya999		Check this speaking
2017-09-20	EugeneDubinchuk	80.00	Check this speaking
2020-08-03	Yuuki Akiko		Check this speaking
2020-12-01	Jaswinder lal		Check this speaking

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the second reason is too short.

Dear Sir,
I try to be more emotional in order to add some nuances to my speech.
Is it a good idea?

Secondly, I listen to the record several time and the second reason is rather too big.
May you clarify what is wrong with this record?

Thank you.

from 17' to 24' is for secondly which is too short.

while from 25', 'and also...', the content is relatively different to 'secondly'. we can consider it 'thirdly'.

Only talk one thing in one reason. and focus on it. Don't make again sub topic.