Despite improvements in vehicle technology, there are still large numbers of road accidents. Explain some of the causes of these accidents, and suggest some measures that could be taken to address the problem
Nowadays, the number of road accidents is on the increase and it becomes one of the most controversial issues among the authorities of metropolitan cities. There are several reasons that would cause these car accidents such as careless drivers and lack of strict laws and government should tackle this difficulty by educating people and introducing new laws.
Although technology brings lots of improvements in vehicles, there are still a few number of road accidents. There are several reasons for this trend that would cause some difficulties for societies. The most important reason is careless drivers who are drunk or do not obey the law and consequently, their high speed and not paying attention to the signs will lead to accidents. Besides, deficiency in strict law, such as obligation in regular car checkups, medical health proves and the like will lead to unforgettable accidents. To support this claim, I can refer to an article having been published in Times magazine, indicates that almost 40% of road accidents are caused by drunk drivers.
In order to reduce the number of accidents, governments should introduce stricter laws to diminish the road collisions. Besides, they should persevere to make improvements in road conditions such as enhancing the bumpy roads and using more signs. Furthermore, by educating young children and making awareness among people they can decrease the number of accidents in the future.
To sum up, not only improvements in the quality of cars, but also the individuals' awareness will help the government to tackle this problem. This way people will live a happier life with less anxiety and stress.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 80, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun number seems to be countable; consider using: 'few numbers'.
Suggestion: few numbers
...ovements in vehicles, there are still a few number of road accidents. There are several re...
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Line 7, column 71, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...ts in the quality of cars, but also the individuals awareness will help the government to t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, furthermore, if, so, still, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1395.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24436090226 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82708016715 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575187969925 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5350961101 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.25 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1666666667 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18726171141 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0705177062125 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550826160141 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101855680578 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0538572775385 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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