The internet shoud be free of charge.
In the modern world more are more people are using the Internet for their own needs. This service has become every day and conventional that we will not be amazed at all if we see a person using the internet on his phone or even watches. There are various ways how people can make the Internet better. One idea is to make it free of charge. Though some people can support it by saying that it is good since it will become available for everyone, I do not concur this point of view.
Personally, I think that people must pay for using the Internet, because this money is spent on its improvements. The major one is the security of this place. Now we are witnesses that the net can be used by criminals for organizing their illegal affairs. Since the Internet provides the opportunity to communicate with people from all around the world, these criminal connections are becoming stronger each year. That is why providers of the Internet are spending a lot of money on mechanisms to prevent these outlaw actions. Most part of this money they receive as the payment for providing the Internet to users.
Moreover, people have to pay money for the Internet access, because it can limit the number of users. Imagine the situation when everyone will be connected to the Internet, because it will be free and hence more people will be able to afford it. There are some great drawbacks. As a computer science student, I know that at this time, companies cannot provide the Internet for everyone, because their do not have the high-developed infrastructure for this. For example, in my country even today not all users of the Internet have a good connections, thus if the number of people with the access to the net increase, the speed and quality will decrease.
The last point why the Internet must be pay that is because companies will invest most of money into improving it. For the last decades the Internet has changed tremendously. The area of mobile Internet is becoming greater, the speed is growing up, and people even have the access being on subway train. If people stop paying, there may occur difficulties with investing new projects and technology.
Thus, based on my reasons I have provided above, I believe that to make the Internet free is not a good idea how it can look on the first glance.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 538, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'connection'?
Suggestion: connection
...t all users of the Internet have a good connections, thus if the number of people with the ...
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Line 9, column 126, Rule ID: ON_FIRST_GLANCE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'at'?
Suggestion: at
...free is not a good idea how it can look on the first glance.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, look, may, moreover, so, thus, for example, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1908.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 407.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68796068796 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50274616903 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.469287469287 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 609.3 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5009108419 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8571428571 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.380952381 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.28571428571 5.45110844103 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251734362887 0.236089414692 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0841616195439 0.076458572812 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689807376608 0.0737576698707 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157482382224 0.150856017488 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.029507971626 0.0645574589148 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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