Some people thinks that it is necessary to travel another country to learn about it. Others argue that all the information is available on TV and the Internet. Discuss both the views and give your own opinion.
The way to learn about other countries in is the controversial debate since beginning, some opine that travel is necessary to learn about other countries while other suggest that all the information about country of which you want to know is available in television as well as on internet. In this essay I will discuss both views. However, I am with former view and I will put forward number of arguments to support my view.
First of all, to know about other country’s history, culture and religion etc visit to that country personally is the best way. When we tour to that country, we meet people, visit country historical places and enjoy the culture and religion they celebrated. For example, there are so many historical places in India that the people can grasp the correct and deep information about its history which may be sometime impossible to be search through T.V and internet. It is also worth mentioning that it is very important to communicate with the people of native residents, especially living together with the local family if someone is more curious to know more about that nation because only through personally interaction, one can let to know about the difference between the foreign country and own country.
However, there are also other alternative available to know about other counties even without visit to that places like television or internet. With the advancement of technology, we can learn through internet about the country of which we are interested in which the most convenient and suitable method. And proponents also believe that not can all afford travelling expenses because it is still sumptuous enjoyment to go abroad. Secondly, in hectic lifestyle, the people get hardly time to travel the other country. Therefore, watching T.V or searching from Google is the suitable way to learn and search about any country.
At last but not least, if financial feasible, it has better go travelling abroad to learn another country. This is because that someone studying the country by their personal feeling and experience is much easier for them to know the new culture.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 455, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: V
...etime impossible to be search through T.V and internet. It is also worth mention...
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Line 5, column 10, Rule ID: ALSO_OTHER[1]
Message: Use simply 'there are other' or 'there are also'
Suggestion: there are other; there are also
...gn country and own country. However, there are also other alternative available to know about oth...
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Line 5, column 31, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'alternatives'?
Suggestion: alternatives
...untry. However, there are also other alternative available to know about other counties ...
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Line 5, column 359, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to travel'.
Suggestion: to travel
...ts also believe that not can all afford travelling expenses because it is still sumptuous ...
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Line 5, column 475, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'hardly' is usually put before the verb 'get'.
Suggestion: hardly get
...condly, in hectic lifestyle, the people get hardly time to travel the other country. There...
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Line 5, column 542, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: V
...he other country. Therefore, watching T.V or searching from Google is the suitabl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, while, for example, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1775.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05698005698 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65805095138 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524216524217 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.733847328 49.4020404114 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.785714286 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0714285714 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329007998373 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104779335539 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0806764163989 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202700035866 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104414853754 0.056905535591 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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