endangered species
The reading and the lecture are both about saving the endangered species from extinction and they discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this effort. The author of the article believes that this huge amount of concern about endangered species is unnatural and has many drawbacks. The lecturer casts doubt on the claims made in the article. He thinks the extinction of endangered species should be prevented and the loss of every single specie may have a lot of consequences.
First of all, the author points out that it has been exaggerated that the extinction of any animal leads to ecological disaster. It is mentioned that in the past many extiction has occurred, such as dinosaurs, and this, results no lasting harm on life on earth. This point is challenged by the lecturer. He says although the extinction of dinosaurs causes no harm, it may shifts the organism dominancy by time. Furthermore he argues that we, the human, are dominating organism, but loss of even one specie may alter the predominancy and would be a threat to us.
Secondly, the author contends that with the advent of new technologies, there is no need to be dependant on nature to obtain new medicine. The article notes that nowadays, with genetic engineering the disease can be healed much more than before and the extinction of animals harms the medical progress no more. The lecturer rebuts this argument. He suggests even now the nature plays a significant role in medicine progress. He elaborates on this by mentioning that today about 40 percent of prescription drugs are based on plants and by extinction of about 100 speceis per day, the opportuinity for researchers to make new medicine out of these species would be lost forever
Finally, the author states that the saving of a species from extinction would have a huge cost. The article establishes that instead of spending a lot of money on endangered speceis, they can invest on more urgent issues. The lecturer, on the other hand, posits that saving animals from extinction may even have a lot of econimical advantages. He brings an example of fresh water muscle and contends that by saving this specie 10 thousands jobs would be created and also 700,000 dollars may be saved. Therefore the endangered species should be saved even just for its financial benefits.
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- Summarize the points made in the lecture. Being sure to explain how they cast doubt on specific points made in the reading passage. 3
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 286, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...es is unnatural and has many drawbacks. The lecturer casts doubt on the claims made...
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Line 3, column 412, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
... shifts the organism dominancy by time. Furthermore he argues that we, the human, are domin...
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Line 5, column 96, Rule ID: DEPENDENT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'dependent' on?
Suggestion: dependent
...ew technologies, there is no need to be dependant on nature to obtain new medicine. The a...
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Line 7, column 502, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
... and also 700,000 dollars may be saved. Therefore the endangered species should be saved ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.4613686534 153% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 5.04856512141 277% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 7.30242825607 164% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 22.412803532 152% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 30.3222958057 178% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.01324503311 219% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1931.0 1373.03311258 141% => OK
No of words: 389.0 270.72406181 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96401028278 5.08290768461 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.04702891845 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72472473355 2.5805825403 106% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 145.348785872 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516709511568 0.540411800872 96% => OK
syllable_count: 599.4 419.366225166 143% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 3.25607064018 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 12.0 8.23620309051 146% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 13.0662251656 138% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.1436194584 49.2860985944 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.277777778 110.228320801 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6111111111 21.698381199 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.77777777778 7.06452816374 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 4.45695364238 247% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270175845601 0.272083759551 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.092048508158 0.0996497079465 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126008712078 0.0662205650399 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192141147801 0.162205337803 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.165195081266 0.0443174109184 373% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.3589403974 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.8541721854 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.2367328918 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.42419426049 101% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 63.6247240618 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.7273730684 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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