Permanent station on venus
Both reading and lecture discuss the possibility of living on other planets but earth as Venus. While author is thoroughly opposed the whole accommodation idea, the lecturer justifies the obstacles elaborately.
First of all, the various pressure on Earth and Venus has been disputed. According to the text, atmospheric pressure at Venus is significantly higher than Earth, which leads to the crush of spacecraft at the very beginning of landing. Although lecturer confirms this fact, he suggests to locate the stations 50 Kilometers above the surface, where the pressure is as of the Earth. Moreover, he suggests this stations to be floated as balloons in the air.
Second subject discussed is the most vital factor for every human being resistance: water and oxygen. It's given that the abundant chemical substance on Venus is carbon dioxide, nitrogen and sulfuric acid, but according to the lecturer it's totally practical to utilize this chemical materials in order to make water and oxygen.
Third, in spite of existence of clouds which reflects 60% of sunlight mentioned by author, lecturer points out that for one thing since this clouds are not very thick, and the possibility of having balloons in the sky for another thing, it's applicable to use reflection for generating electricity not only from the top, but also from the bottom of the clouds. By taking to the action of this method, the urgent need to energy will be acquired.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, second, so, third, while, another thing, first of all, for another thing, for one thing, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 12.0772626932 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 22.412803532 54% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 30.3222958057 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1207.0 1373.03311258 88% => OK
No of words: 237.0 270.72406181 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09282700422 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.04702891845 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64748347654 2.5805825403 103% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 145.348785872 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603375527426 0.540411800872 112% => OK
syllable_count: 375.3 419.366225166 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.23620309051 36% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 21.2450331126 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 84.8471566996 49.2860985944 172% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.7 110.228320801 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7 21.698381199 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.2 7.06452816374 187% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127701156202 0.272083759551 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0544659194966 0.0996497079465 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472129443365 0.0662205650399 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0711709095321 0.162205337803 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0617606882023 0.0443174109184 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.3589403974 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.8541721854 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.0289183223 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.2367328918 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.42419426049 109% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 63.6247240618 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.7273730684 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.498013245 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.