With divorce rates and family breakdowns increasing globally, it is generally accepted that families today are not as close as they used to be.
Discuss the causes of this problem and offer dome possible solutions to it.
It is true that these days family ties are not as strong as it used to be and families are less closed and family members usually soffer the lack of intimacy. There are some serious reasons for this trend and government authorities and family members shold take steps to tackle this problem.
There are various reasons why people argue that families getting divorce easily and we face more family breakdowns and consequently there is no integrity among family members. Firstly, couples are less committed to each other and this scheme is apparent in daily news of love affairs and cheating. Secondly, in the past getting divorce was a taboo in each society and individuals tried to make family relationships stronger but unfortunately nowadays it becomes popular among fellows to get divorce. Finally, families spend less time with each other since they have to work all day long to make a living for their families and as a result parents are not involved in children's upbringing and children grew up under grandparent's supervision. A salient example of this is the Denmark in which government could diminish the divorce rate by enhancing the economy conditions almost 20%.
Governments and individuals should address this problem by finding tangible solutions. One solution is providing better social welfare by government authorities which will give the families the chance to work less and spend more time with family members. Not only families would be impressed by this solution, but also society would be benefited as well since fewer people will get divorce due to the financial difficulties. Furthermore, by making awareness among the residents of each society and educating children about the importance of family as well as expansion of morality and conventions, the average quality of life will increase. To support my claim, I can refer to an article having been published in Times magazine, indicates that improving the economic conditions in 2008 in UAE could impact the family relationships up to 12.5%.
To conclude, although the families are more concerned with economical issues and try to provide families with best life conditions, they should strengthen the family ties and expand their relationships.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 23, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
It is true that these days family ties are not as strong as it use...
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Line 3, column 716, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'grandparents'' or 'grandparent's'?
Suggestion: grandparents'; grandparent's
...s upbringing and children grew up under grandparents supervision. A salient example of this ...
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Line 7, column 60, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...gh the families are more concerned with economical issues and try to provide families with...
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Line 7, column 106, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the best'.
Suggestion: with the best
...ical issues and try to provide families with best life conditions, they should strengthen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, as a result, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1877.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24301675978 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75443498406 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553072625698 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 594.0 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.0568951463 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.384615385 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5384615385 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4615384615 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306340520738 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11317720838 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617339672767 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20621113509 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0262300180677 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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