You recently finished studying at a university in another country where you shared a
house with a fellow student. Something urgent came up while your housemate was
away on a short trip and you had to leave without saying goodbye.
Write to your housemate. In your letter
• Apologise for leaving without saying goodbye
• Explain why you have to leave
Dear John,
I hope you are well and enjoyed your trip to Australia.
I am writing to apologize for leaving the house without saying goodbye when you were on a trip. I did not want to bother you by making a phone call or sending an email during your journey. It was a great experience for me sharing a house with a friend like you. Not only you were a conscientious housemate but also I have learnt an incredible amount from you.
Unfortunately my mom had a terrible accident on 21th of July and I had to came back home immidiately. I was in such a hurry that even forgot to leave you a message at home or making a phone call. She had an operation and she is healing gradually but since there is no one who can take care of her I had to stay here. I will transfer the last month's rent To your bank account and hope you will pay it to the landloard.
I wish you accept my appology and hope to see you soon.
Love,
Rahi
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 752.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.13186813187 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37891149499 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642857142857 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.3467315591 44.8134815571 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.2 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.9 4.34317383033 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320903665912 0.216113520407 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116573608936 0.0766984524023 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591406147204 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198311822956 0.12726935374 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441974850344 0.0580467560999 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.67 8.71597938144 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.26 7.59969072165 82% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 41.2886597938 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.