Writing task 1 (a letter)
You need to attend a family event. Your child will be missing school for a day. Write a letter to the school principal and say
– What is the event?
– Why is it important for your child to be there?
– How will your child make up for missed lessons?
Hello Miss Rosy,
Principal of St. Mary School,
Greetings for the day. !!
I am Divya, mother of one of your pupil, Jay Patel, he is studying in 5th standard. I am writing this letter to grant your permission for 3 days leave my son as we have to attend marraige of my his maternal uncle in our hometown.
As per our family tradition, some of the important rituals needs to be performed by small kids of the family and in our family Jay is the only grandson so it's important for him to attend this marraige and fulfill our traditions. I know due to this event, he will miss school for 3 days and next month his annual exams are coming so you will not advise take him with us but I assure you that once we will return from an event I will personally look into his missed lessons. I will take notes of missed classes from his classmate Darshan's mother and will teach the same to Jay so this event will not affect his exams.
I request you to accept this leave application.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Kind Regards,
Divya
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 30, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...metown. As per our family tradition, some of the important rituals needs to be performed...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...is event will not affect his exams. I request you to accept this leave applic...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 857.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4175257732 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26306710358 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603092783505 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.8085643373 44.8134815571 171% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2222222222 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5555555556 16.8248392259 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.44444444444 4.34317383033 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31522642613 0.216113520407 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10412841904 0.0766984524023 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0731835389012 0.0603063233224 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121406704579 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0768370753445 0.0580467560999 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 70.7449484536 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.36 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 8.62886597938 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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