Travel to study is over rated, we have brilliant scholars who studied locally. Is travel really required for higher studies?
For higher studies, some of them are traveling to abroad even though we have great doctorates who completed their research studies. Truly speaking, we don’t need required to move to other countries for higher education.
Some of the students and parents have their mind set that migrate for postgraduates and undergraduates would be benefited. They do assuming that the quality of university in their country is not sophisticated for the student’s future. Especially, the job market after the graduation would be a questionable one. The companies in their countries would not come for campus interview, even for ranked universities. This would cause a vast change in the student’s career after completing their college.
At that same time, the students who are belongings to middle class, they never taught that they would go for another country for university studies. They are compromising and managing the studies in their own country. They took a role model of great scientist and entrepreneurs who are shining in their home country after the institutions. They are strongly believing and debating that traveling for higher education would never give any splendid performance instead it is a lavish thing. It really depends upon the talents of the individual not schools.
In conclusion, journey for higher studies never makes any change for the people. It is all rely on the brilliant and intellectual of the concern, not universities. So, everyone could learn a lot in their own country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
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Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...ge. At that same time, the students who are belongings to middle class, they never ...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ir home country after the institutions. They are strongly believing and debating tha...
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...me country after the institutions. They are strongly believing and debating that traveling for higher ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
really, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1280.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 240.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33333333333 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00128444725 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.1474412828 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.3333333333 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.66666666667 7.06120827912 24% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224029724366 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734795951043 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652847453665 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149352917754 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0619478951186 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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