Your school has received a gift of money. What do you think is the best way for your school to spend this money? Use specific reasons and details to support your choice.

Grammar and spelling errors:
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... decent trainer, students learn faster. To be more specific, not only do expert te...
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Suggestion: use the easiest
...se state-the-art methods, but also they use easiest way to explain to students. For instanc...
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Suggestion:
...result, math was not a nightmare anymore thanks to the my export tutor. Secondl...
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Suggestion:
...h was not a nightmare anymore thanks to the my export tutor. Secondly, school c...
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Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'my'?
Suggestion: the; my
...was not a nightmare anymore thanks to the my export tutor. Secondly, school can aug...
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...famous among others Because there are a bit quit competitive between schools. Furth...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, as a result, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 52.1666666667 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1281.0 1977.66487455 65% => OK
No of words: 267.0 407.700716846 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79775280899 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46595014109 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.65543071161 0.524837075471 125% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 618.680645161 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.2177284241 48.9658058833 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.1666666667 100.406767564 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8333333333 20.6045352989 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.27777777778 5.45110844103 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16471556133 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0479832430108 0.076458572812 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572562354969 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10473468185 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.053560421066 0.0645574589148 83% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 11.7677419355 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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