04/10/2017
Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life. What are the reasons? Do advantages of this outweigh disadvantages?
A growing number of couples want to give a birth to a child when they will be older and wiser. Below some reasons of the trend will be discussed and its merits and drawbacks will be given.
To begin with, many adults decide to postpone a pregnancy because they wish to build a career and establish themselves. In fact, today’s society often measures how successful a person is through his or her job position. Furthermore, by delaying having offspring young people acquires a possibility to create all needed conditions for bringing up their progeny. For instance, many established grown-ups own apartments, automobiles and a large bank account with savings. All of this allows the mature parents to provide their offspring with goods and services that may be required.
However, this trend has some advantages and disadvantages. Primarily, children of mature individuals have a better start in life because kids are given proper care and attention. They will have toys that develop their brains and bodies, tutors and teachers who will help youngsters to study better, and money to pay for studying in college or university. In addition, psychological studies demonstrate those who become fathers and mothers aged thirty and above usually devote a lot of time to the upbringing of their kids.
At the same time, giving a birth later in life is associated with a higher probability of health issues of a new-born. Statistically, offspring of mature mothers have more chances to be born earlier than expected and have problems with a nervous system that increase a likelihood of having mental disorders in the adulthood. Moreover, mothers risk undermining their overall health because about one-third of all women who go through a pregnancy later in a life will have a surgery connected with or caused by it.
To sum up, although reasons that lead to the trend are understandable and important, drawbacks definitely outweigh benefits because the well-being of children and women must be put first.
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Below some reasons of the trend will be discussed and its merits and drawbacks will be given.
Below some reasons of the trend will be discussed, and its merits and drawbacks will be given. //wrong for A and B and C
to build a career and establish themselves.
description: establish somebody as something, like: Reagan quickly established himself as a promising film actor.
many established grown-ups own apartments
many established their own apartments
young people acquires a possibility
young people acquire a possibility
They will have toys that develop their brains and bodies, tutors and teachers who will help youngsters to study better, and money to pay for studying in college or university.
They will have toys to develop their brains and bodies, tutors and teachers to help study better, and money to pay for studying in college or university. //parallel, and to be more clear
a nervous system that increase a likelihood
a nervous system that increases a likelihood
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flaws:
1. No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
2. read the topic carefully, '...when they will be older and wiser', the topic is actually: 'to have children later.'
'later' doesn't mean 'older or wiser'
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 327 350
No. of Characters: 1636 1500
No. of Different Words: 196 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.252 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.003 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.744 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 126 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 94 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 63 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 41 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.8 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.645 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.6 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.289 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.573 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.042 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Dear Sir,
Dear Sir,
I have a question about my mistake.
Statistically, offspring of mature mothers have more chances to be born earlier than expected and have problems with a nervous system that increase a likelihood of having mental disorders in the adulthood.
The verb "increase" refers to problems with a nervous system.
Is it correct?
Grammatically, "increase"
Grammatically, "increase" refers to a nervous system, not 'problems' here
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, third, well, for instance, in addition, in fact, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1689.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16513761468 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85856013521 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599388379205 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1374930366 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.6 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182962119825 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0551055227247 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0387761117572 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0863637883482 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0444783717547 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.