Education is the biggest barrier in my learning- Einstein. What do you mean by this? And do you think Einstein was correct in saying that.
In this day and age, the education's barrier has become on going debate among public all aroun the world, which means to a moot question"is there any barrier of education?". It is a widely tent to believe that governments should pave the way on education, people have to stugger to learn the new science.
To begin with, there are several reasons why I believe that there is no any drawback in education. First and foremost is that every thing in the globe related to the education ans withough sufficient knowledge no one could learn how to deal with equepments. In addition, offspring need to learn more and more to be succesful in their future. Thus, there is little room doubt that in learning authorities should provide people with better education.
However, needless to say every gareden may have some weed. In other words, there are alot of problems in education. Firstly, balance budget is the most important one which leds to insufficient programs in the schools. Secondly, a huge sources of information and references are the aother drawbacks that should be came into consideration.
To recapitulate, In my sentiment I firmly believe that Einstein was the one of the profound scientist in the world which measured the objects and I firmly agree with him.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 26, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'educations'' or 'education's'?
Suggestion: educations'; education's
In this day and age, the educations barrier has become on going debate amon...
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Line 1, column 56, Rule ID: ON_GOING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'ongoing'?
Suggestion: ongoing
... age, the educations barrier has become on going debate among public all aroun the world...
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Line 1, column 190, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('widely') instead an adjective, or a noun ('tent') instead of another adjective.
... any barrier of education?'. It is a widely tent to believe that governments should pave...
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Line 3, column 70, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...ral reasons why I believe that there is no any drawback in education. First and fo...
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Line 3, column 145, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and foremost is that every thing in the globe related to the education ans witho...
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Line 5, column 236, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'source'?
Suggestion: source
...ograms in the schools. Secondly, a huge sources of information and references are the a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, may, second, secondly, so, thus, in addition, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1070.0 1207.87684729 89% => OK
No of words: 214.0 242.827586207 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87864121536 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 139.433497537 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61214953271 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 334.8 379.143842365 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4634310977 50.4703680194 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.2727272727 104.977214359 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4545454545 20.9669160288 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.09090909091 7.25397266985 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126565000364 0.242375264174 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0367200185664 0.0925447433944 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413214476117 0.071462118173 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0730622292591 0.151781067708 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.041499191804 0.0609392437508 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 55.0591133005 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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