Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become move useful adults.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, children are becoming more complex. They are influenced by many factors around them, so parents should control their activity regularly. Different places of living will create different personality as well. Also, environment is the biggest factor which influences the people growing. This essay will examine how to build children’s personality.
Many parents agree that they only need to build their children to be helpful adults. With the preparing their generations for their future, this will be better than build the children’s personality in the early age. They believe that it is not necessary to give a pressure to their children in their childhood.
However, other parents believe that they should control their children well as early as they can. The early education will build the children’s behavior strongly. As a result, they wile easier to manage their children not to make problems. Also, it will make them more relax in life.
In addition, I think young people should prepare well in all aspects of their life. This will make them be better than others who never been educated. In society, this will be more accepted because they have better manner than uneducated young people. This is the best way to build a good personality in each person.
In a nutshell, children should get many lessons of life as early as possible. This will more memorable and stronger than children who never receive education in their early ages for their future. Also, it will give them many benefits in their daily lives.
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